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Old 10-07-2008, 12:08 AM   #1
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Old 10-07-2008, 12:50 AM   #2
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IMO, the "Limited Edition" "2008" parts look out of place.

Also, there is nothing tying it all together. It is just kind of bland.

But +1 for the Brew Maiden


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Old 10-07-2008, 01:58 AM   #3
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I like the idea, but I also agree, the Limited Edition - 2008 don't fit with the lable.
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Chick is hot and the white background is a great base for a label.

"Limited Edition" is hard to read and is out of place, as is the 2008. I'd put it along a horizontal line towards the bottom or right below Oktoberfest Bier. 2008 should be half the size of Oktoberfest Bier and Limited Edition should be half the size of 2008.
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Old 10-07-2008, 05:27 AM   #5
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Bavarian blue checker flag motif should be in there somewhere.
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And there is no need to literally translate "West Palm Beach, Florida, America"


It just doesn't really translate...I speak pretty fluent German, and I was even confused by this. . .

Love the Maedchen, though.. . .


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