Oktoberfest Bier - Home Brew Forums
Home Brew Forums > Home Brewing Beer > Label Display & Discussion > Oktoberfest Bier

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 10-07-2008, 12:08 AM   #1
nairb80
Recipes 
 
Feb 2008
West Palm Beac, FL
Posts: 19





 
Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-2008, 12:50 AM   #2
Brooklyn-Brewtality
Four Beasts Brewery
HBT_LIFETIMESUPPORTER.png
 
Brooklyn-Brewtality's Avatar
Recipes 
 
Aug 2008
Brooklyn
Posts: 2,278
Liked 24 Times on 19 Posts


IMO, the "Limited Edition" "2008" parts look out of place.

Also, there is nothing tying it all together. It is just kind of bland.

But +1 for the Brew Maiden


__________________
Kegged: Berlinerweisse, Dubbel, Galaxy Wheat
Bottled: Golden Strong, Mild, IIPA, Rauch
Fermenting: Saison, Imperial Wheat Stout, Brett Saison, APA, Brett Roggenbier

 
Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-2008, 01:58 AM   #3
Borisbbadd
Recipes 
 
Aug 2008
Utah
Posts: 992
Liked 4 Times on 4 Posts


I like the idea, but I also agree, the Limited Edition - 2008 don't fit with the lable.
__________________
Time you enjoy wasting, is not wasted time...

 
Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-2008, 03:24 AM   #4
A4J
HBT_LIFETIMESUPPORTER.png
 
A4J's Avatar
Recipes 
 
Mar 2008
the Desert, CA
Posts: 1,350
Liked 30 Times on 25 Posts


Chick is hot and the white background is a great base for a label.

"Limited Edition" is hard to read and is out of place, as is the 2008. I'd put it along a horizontal line towards the bottom or right below Oktoberfest Bier. 2008 should be half the size of Oktoberfest Bier and Limited Edition should be half the size of 2008.
__________________
Primary 1: pale ale
Primary 2: blondie


My mid-century modern keezer build thread.

 
Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-2008, 05:27 AM   #5
Biermann
Reinvented Biermann
HBT_LIFETIMESUPPORTER.png
 
Biermann's Avatar
Recipes 
 
Mar 2006
East Peoria, IL
Posts: 1,461
Liked 32 Times on 20 Posts


Bavarian blue checker flag motif should be in there somewhere.
__________________
--------------------------------------------------------
On Draft: Old, Stale, Oxidized beer


Holding tanks:Sold
Conical #1:Sold
Bottles: Nichts
On Deck:

 
Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-2008, 05:32 AM   #6
Biermann
Reinvented Biermann
HBT_LIFETIMESUPPORTER.png
 
Biermann's Avatar
Recipes 
 
Mar 2006
East Peoria, IL
Posts: 1,461
Liked 32 Times on 20 Posts


And there is no need to literally translate "West Palm Beach, Florida, America"


It just doesn't really translate...I speak pretty fluent German, and I was even confused by this. . .

Love the Maedchen, though.. . .


__________________
--------------------------------------------------------
On Draft: Old, Stale, Oxidized beer


Holding tanks:Sold
Conical #1:Sold
Bottles: Nichts
On Deck:

 
Reply With Quote
Reply
Thread Tools


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Another first brewing day! ALT Bier FxdGrMind Beginners Beer Brewing Forum 10 01-01-2009 10:31 PM
Help with my bier de chute!! Beernewb Beginners Beer Brewing Forum 1 12-13-2008 02:11 AM
Alt Bier? Cpt_Kirks General Techniques 9 12-03-2008 02:54 PM
German Alt Bier rbankert Recipes/Ingredients 5 04-17-2007 01:32 PM
Belgian Wit Bier mysterio All Grain & Partial Mash Brewing 2 09-15-2006 08:00 PM


Forum Jump