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Old 09-25-2008, 07:48 PM   #1
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Second label coincidentally enough for the second batch ever.

Thoughts and comment and razzing are appreciated...:

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Old 09-25-2008, 08:09 PM   #2
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Not bad!!!!

 
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Old 09-25-2008, 08:23 PM   #3
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i like it, but feel that the dragon should be larger. also, get rid of the says-it.com URL
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Old 09-25-2008, 08:46 PM   #4
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Per the suggestion of BerserkerB, now edited to take out the says-it url. Definitely an improvement and one I wanted, but didn't know how to do...until I messed with the Paint program a bit and also got the color right to match the background.

I don't think there's anything I can do about the dragon size.


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Fermenter - Mystery Hops Winter Ale - bottled Dec. 20 - 1 lb Crystal 40l, 8lb LME, 8 ounces Karo (why not?), and 6 or 7 handfulls of hops

Drinking - SMaSH ale from Mystery Backyard Hops Version II with less hops and more fermentables - bottled Nov. 17

Deep Reserve - SMaSH ale from Mystery Backyard Hops (into the bottles on October 11); a winner & saving 5 bottles out

Deep Reserve - LHBS Recipe IPA - first effort Sept. 13, good stuff but undercarbed; saving 4 bottles

 
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Old 09-25-2008, 09:02 PM   #5
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Here you go:

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Old 09-25-2008, 09:06 PM   #6
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[QUOTE=BerserkerBrew;867853]Here you go:



How'd you do that???
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Fermenter - Mystery Hops Winter Ale - bottled Dec. 20 - 1 lb Crystal 40l, 8lb LME, 8 ounces Karo (why not?), and 6 or 7 handfulls of hops

Drinking - SMaSH ale from Mystery Backyard Hops Version II with less hops and more fermentables - bottled Nov. 17

Deep Reserve - SMaSH ale from Mystery Backyard Hops (into the bottles on October 11); a winner & saving 5 bottles out

Deep Reserve - LHBS Recipe IPA - first effort Sept. 13, good stuff but undercarbed; saving 4 bottles

 
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Old 09-25-2008, 09:08 PM   #7
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Quote:
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How'd you do that???
I have some mild self-taught photoshop skills.

try out GIMP 2.0. it is a free photoshop-MSPaint hybrid
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Old 09-25-2008, 09:22 PM   #8
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Good concept, I like the logo. I would try saving it at a bit higher quality though, or retouching that dragon.. it's gotten pretty brutalized by jpeg compression at some point.

Maybe trying breaking up the brown with an image, or even a texture?

I just hit google and threw something in there to show you what I mean... a nice brown leather texture might look cool as well.



^something like that? Break up all those bland colors.

 
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Old 09-25-2008, 10:19 PM   #9
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That really is fantastic, Mr. Trout, and by the way, I really like all your books.

Seriously, great, great stuff. The additions, suggestions, and help is very much appreciated.
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Fermenter - Mystery Hops Winter Ale - bottled Dec. 20 - 1 lb Crystal 40l, 8lb LME, 8 ounces Karo (why not?), and 6 or 7 handfulls of hops

Drinking - SMaSH ale from Mystery Backyard Hops Version II with less hops and more fermentables - bottled Nov. 17

Deep Reserve - SMaSH ale from Mystery Backyard Hops (into the bottles on October 11); a winner & saving 5 bottles out

Deep Reserve - LHBS Recipe IPA - first effort Sept. 13, good stuff but undercarbed; saving 4 bottles

 
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Old 09-26-2008, 01:56 PM   #10
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Trout's got it, good stuff!
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