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Old 05-04-2008, 01:53 PM   #1
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Old 05-05-2008, 02:30 AM   #2
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I like it all except for the font used for the brewery name.

Nice graphic.


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Old 05-05-2008, 12:55 PM   #3
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Before reading Bill's response, I thought the same thing about the Brewery font. It seems too futuristic imo. Love the chosen graphic, and I think it works well with the name.
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Old 05-05-2008, 01:06 PM   #4
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I like it all except for the font used for the brewery name.
+1. I think it's too computery and hard for the soft overall image. Love the imagery though.
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Old 05-06-2008, 12:10 AM   #5
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I really like the label!

+1 on a different font for the brewery name
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Old 07-18-2008, 09:18 AM   #6
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Old 07-18-2008, 12:12 PM   #7
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Much better the second go around. I love this label. Great imagery!
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Old 07-18-2008, 02:30 PM   #8
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loving the second one.
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Old 07-31-2008, 05:36 PM   #9
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Have you tried using a similar colored/style font for teh top as well to balance it? just a suggestion to try. Might look worse


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