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Old 04-03-2008, 10:05 PM   #1
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made a change, what do ya think?



original:
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Old 04-03-2008, 10:39 PM   #2
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I personally like it much better.

 
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Old 04-03-2008, 10:50 PM   #3
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the D in lady looks like an "a", your mix of caps and non-caps is confusing. Stick with one font & just change the first letter into a bigger size. Good colors though, i like the pink and black, it definitly stands out.
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Old 04-04-2008, 02:27 AM   #4
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I think the change is for the better.

Still missing something though...don't know what.

Small text under "foxy lady" telling what the beer is, maybe?
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Old 04-04-2008, 05:30 PM   #5
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yea the new lips look WAY better! sweet label. i agree, some small text or something, placed in the right area would help it look final, finished. really like it!!!
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Old 04-04-2008, 06:13 PM   #6
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New lip pic owns, the contrast is great on the label have always liked the pink vs black color combo, the "d" looking like an "a" is problematic I would just try to find a different lowercase style/font "d" and should look sweet

 
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Old 04-04-2008, 07:47 PM   #7
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Call me weird but I like the first one better.
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Old 04-04-2008, 08:16 PM   #8
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Ok, your weird.

Yeah the 2nd on is much better. I think that people are going to know what it says though even if the a is funky
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Old 04-04-2008, 08:47 PM   #9
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I like the "d" and all the crazy lettering! I also like how there is no other info.

I think you have a keeper

 
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Old 04-06-2008, 07:05 PM   #10
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thanks guys! yeah it is all one font and it is not a mix of caps and lowercase...i will finalize it with a description of the beer like was mentioned...
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