This is a complex beer but it should work for your first AG. A couple of suggestions though:
You show 5 pounds of MO and 1 1/2 Lb of pail malt. Couldn't you just use all MO?
1 1/2 pounds of crystal is a lot. Maybe reduce it to 1/2 to 1 pound and use a darker, say 60şL crystal.
.75 pounds of Vienna and .5 pounds of Munich aren't going to have a huge effect on your beer. You might think about increasing them some and reduce your base malt by the difference. Both of these will convert during the mash.
Good luck and keep us posted!