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Old 07-27-2012, 05:05 AM   #1
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So I haven't even bottled my first brew, but I'm stoked with anticipation. I'm beginning with a Red Irish Ale.

I love history and beer, so I sort of combined my two loves. The name: Sputnik Irish Ale. The Sputnik comes in with the sanitizing my airlock with Russian Vodka, and the Irish Ale is obvious.



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Old 07-27-2012, 05:42 AM   #2
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You're mixing your metaphors, platitudinously speaking. Also, the graphic is busy. I'd still drink the beer, but it might give me a headache to look at the label. Maybe try the Times more as a watermark?
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