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Old 06-15-2012, 07:04 AM   #1
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Default New Contract Brewery what do you think?

Howdy all!

I'm starting a contract brewery and I would like to get some opinions if you don't mind.

The brewery is called Eternal Student Brewery and I will be making a pomegranate wheat and an ASB to start out with.

This is what I am thinking for my initial sticker idea.



And this is for my American special bitter.



Soooo, what do you think?


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Old 06-15-2012, 02:45 PM   #2
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I would maybe adjust the angle on "Eternal" and "Student" in the top one. It's a bit sharp, which makes it a bit difficult to read. Perhaps a more gentle arch would work.

Bottom one looks good.
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Old 06-15-2012, 04:58 PM   #3
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I would maybe adjust the angle on "Eternal" and "Student" in the top one. It's a bit sharp, which makes it a bit difficult to read. Perhaps a more gentle arch would work.
I agree with what Tom said, but I'm guessing the triangle has some sort of symbolism for you?

Also, just a slight suggestion for the label. I would maybe make the ingredients, O.G, A.B.V, and about the brew a different font from everything else. Something a little simpler (some kind of basic, sans serif font http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=501). The other one just seems a little hard to read that small in blocks of text.

They both look good though!
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