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Old 04-04-2012, 07:19 PM   #51
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Really well done man

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Old 04-04-2012, 08:02 PM   #52
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great job, very well made. I would stop by for the opening if i wasn't 2,800 miles away

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Old 04-04-2012, 09:17 PM   #53
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Nice opening to the commercial. I would tone down the background music bit. Other that that good pans thru the descriptions of the products and what is available. It was a enough to say I need to visit to see more.
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Old 04-04-2012, 09:32 PM   #54
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I know you picked the font because of your logo, but I thought it was a bit much using it for the majority of your text.

Aside from that, the audio and video quality was great, and everyone was well composed and fairly natural, unlike a lot of store owners/employees that are awkward in front of the camera.
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Thanks for all the tips guys!
I cant wait to see it on TV.
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Old 04-05-2012, 11:17 AM   #56
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Not going to skim the comments on this one, but....

Pretty good all around. Bigger phone numbers, not sure if they just looked small on the PC or if they are small.

Also, Do the actual # underneath. I'd also include area codes.
So 221 - Brew becomes (###) ### - ####

Cell phones don't always have the letters so it can be hard to call sometimes. Also, sometimes in a hotel or w/e might see and need the area code.

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