For me, I would back off on the specialty grains a bit and increase the two row. When Using Cara III and Special Roast a little goes a long way. I usually only use a pound or so of specialty grains total and the rest is base grains.
I like the ingredients. It looks a lot like something I would make.
Carport Brewery, Lilburn GA
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