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Old 01-20-2011, 06:05 AM   #1
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So I'm making one of Kal's snazzy electric setups and I am to the point of putting on the lovely black and white logo.

So what do you all think. Suggestions etc are welcome. Ofcourse the colors will be reversed at printing so suggestions or comments besides that.

http:[email protected]/5371556993

Try that. For what ever reason I cannot get the damn links to work tonight.
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Old 01-20-2011, 06:11 AM   #2
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hmmmmm... i can't see anything.
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Old 01-20-2011, 06:16 AM   #3
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For the life of me I cannot get images to link on any website this evening. Just left the link up.
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Old 01-20-2011, 01:55 PM   #4
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Here ya go.

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Old 01-20-2011, 02:11 PM   #5
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I think its a good basic idea. IMO, there are too many illustrations in place of words. The barley makes sense. What is the hop for. Longlrm, Longorm, Longarm...I can't figure out what its supposed to say. I think the handcuffs are a little out of place too. You have the brewing thing going on, buy why handcuffs? I think is a little busy and doesnt have a very clear messge.

 
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Old 01-20-2011, 02:40 PM   #6
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I would simplify it. If you're going for the "Long Arm of the Law" theme maybe remove the barley and hops graphics and just use the handcuffs. Or replace all of the graphics with normal letters and integrate the handcuffs (or a sheriff's badge?) in the background somehow.

 
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Old 01-20-2011, 02:49 PM   #7
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I agree that the hop is a little hard to figure out. To keep the hop have you tried whiting out the black spot above the stem and the two below the top row to make it look more like an "A"?

 
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Old 01-20-2011, 04:12 PM   #8
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I like it as it is

 
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Old 01-20-2011, 04:24 PM   #9
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Naked, Thanks for the fix.

How does the hop look now?

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Old 01-21-2011, 05:31 AM   #10
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Now with an update above. Does this look any better?
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