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Old 08-06-2010, 05:45 PM   #1
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Default Final logo and first label

I submitted my rough logo a week or so ago and have been messing with it ever since. Well, I am finally finished with the logo and the first bottle label.
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Old 08-06-2010, 07:16 PM   #2
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Old 08-06-2010, 07:23 PM   #3
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I think that's going to fit real nice on a bottle! Good job!
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Old 08-06-2010, 07:31 PM   #4
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Looks really good. My only comment is how cartoony the "Brewing Company, Windsor,PA" is compared to the test of the logo. Seems kind of out of place.
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My first word of advice is never say FINAL. Even the pros tweak their logos from time to time.

In all seriousness, I'm with IP on this. I was loving it UNTIL I scrolled down and saw the bottle caps w/ letters. It disrupts the flow and feel. COPPER ROCK is nicely colored and shaded with depth and texture. There's none of that with the bottle caps.
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Agree with the others, that is an AMAZING label, but there's something unnatural about the brewery lettering. If it helps any I think due to lack of texture. I couldn't tell they were supposed to be bottle caps until Kilted said something. Other than that, I wouldn't change a thing. GREAT WORK!
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I concur with everyone else: beautiful label, right up until you hit the "brewing company" business.

You should totally make it looked those words are stamped into the plate.
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I like the logo alot - well done!
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ok, redid the crappy font, what do you think now?

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looks great but I still get lost with the Brewing Company part, maybe because its really similar to the colors on the plate itself and the background of the label...what about making it a solid color..the Copper Rock looks awesome!



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