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Old 01-18-2010, 03:51 PM   #1
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I'm relatively new to brewing, and very new to label designs. I decided to combine my two favorite hobbies - golf and beer - thus, back nine brewing. Also, I intend to have all my beer names carry the golf theme (lob wedge wheat).

I put this together, but I'm looking for some comments to make it look a little more professional. Thanks.



http://i965.photobucket.com/albums/a...wedgewheat.jpg


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Old 01-18-2010, 04:08 PM   #2
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I think it looks cool...
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Old 01-19-2010, 12:10 AM   #3
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The problem with pulling images from different sources is that they all look like different art styles. IE, the clubs, ball, and background.

These suggestions might be tough without a real graphics software program:

The clubs need to be cut out cleanly, and the grooves on the heads should be cleaner instead of all blurry.

Clubs and Ball should be the same style artwork.

I personally don't like the font for "BNB"

I'm not sure why you lowered the contrast of the background picture, but i think if you toned it up and made it clean and crisp it would look "more professional"
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