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Old 09-21-2006, 01:42 AM   #1
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What do you guys think of this as a base label...

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Old 09-21-2006, 01:50 AM   #2
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Looks good - nice beer-ey color scheme. I would suggest using the same font both for the vertical and main words. Oh and maybe make the label about 10% bigger. Keep up the good work!


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Old 09-21-2006, 01:51 PM   #3
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i agree, looks good.. like the color too

 
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Old 09-21-2006, 03:54 PM   #4
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Nice. Simple style, good color. Thumbs up.

 
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Old 09-21-2006, 06:28 PM   #5
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clean. i think its nice

 
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Old 09-21-2006, 08:00 PM   #6
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looks good!
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Old 09-22-2006, 12:50 AM   #7
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Greetings to the brewer form "Little Rhody". Nice label. Short & sweet.
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Old 09-22-2006, 12:57 AM   #8
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Nice - good job
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Old 09-22-2006, 03:43 AM   #9
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I made some changes to try and make it pop a bit more...

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Old 09-22-2006, 04:05 AM   #10
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I like the simple design. Makes for a nice micro-brew-ish to the point label.

IMHO, use your original green color with the starburst and I think you'll really have something.

Perhaps I'm being over-critical...I noticed your spelling changed from one version to the next...perhaps Daedalus is the word you're looking for? http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=&q=define%3Adaedalus


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