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Old 05-14-2009, 08:50 AM   #1
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Default My First two labels.

Here are the first two labels we've created. Let me know what you think.

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_5Rrnsyvj-S...00-h/g5851.png

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_5Rrnsyvj-S...00-h/g3030.png



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Old 05-14-2009, 09:01 AM   #2
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do you have them hosted somewhere

there are no links or pictures


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Old 05-14-2009, 09:04 AM   #3
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fixed the problem

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Old 05-14-2009, 09:20 AM   #4
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Very nice labels!!!
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Both are really well done. Clean, simple, well made. Makes me want to take a sip without even seeing the beer
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Old 05-14-2009, 04:56 PM   #6
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well done....
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Old 05-14-2009, 05:02 PM   #7
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Very nice. How did you make the grain "grow" from the round border?
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Old 05-14-2009, 06:11 PM   #8
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Not sure if you were looking for feedback but here goes...

Well done and a good song, The Fields of Athenry. I've never actually seen it written in it's Irish form. I'm not entirely sure how they fit on a bottle but perhaps "Ath Na Riogh" would fit nicely if it were larger and "Irish Red Ale" could flow smaller under it. The archaic font may be a bit hard to read as is and I can see the words having the potential to just run together as is. You could even set "Irish Red Ale" in a more basic serif font to contrast.

Perhaps on the side panel you may want to put a pronunciation in parenthesis as well.

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Old 05-15-2009, 09:21 PM   #9
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I like them both. My only suggestion for the first one is making the font larger and possibly split into two lines. It looks a bit tall and squished to the eye. Two lines may let the font "breathe" more. I might make the backstory a wee bit larger as well.

I find it far easier than to critique other people's work than actually finish my own.
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i like them. especially the first one.


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