I like the style, less text though. I'm not a huge fan of putting all sorts of text on a beer label, I try and keep it simple. If you want to include all of it, I would create another label and put it on the back of the bottle and leave just the Myers Brothers Pale Ale portion for the front label. The stylized logo and hop flower look really nice.
Zwei Brüder Brauerei
Planning: Nutcastle Brown, Founder's Breakfast Stout
Primary: Apfelwein w/Cherry
Secondary: Flanders Red, ESB2, ESB3, Hobgoblin PM
Bottle: Black Beauty Honey Rye, Holiday Chestnut Ale, Grumpy Gnome IPA, Sumatran Espresso Stout, Apfelwein, All Jacked Up, Patriot's Amber, ESB1, Belgian Dubbel.