Label concept and a couple examples

I decided to go with a theme of personification in the names and labels of my beers. That is, each beer gets a fictional person's name, and on each label is a picture of the person. I'm keeping the design simple enough to do in paint, and I write a description of the beer but word it as though it were describing a person's story/personality. First label is an irish red ale:
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Next is the same irish red ale recipe brewed to the specs of an american amber:

On the way is Alphonse abbey style tripel. I'd love some feedback, the write ups are meant to be a bit cheesy and sort of commercial.

Try white text. They're tough as hell to read.

Trei cool. I like the idea of namin the beers good idea. Nice.

I like the new white font/size much better

Great concept and labels. I like Kieran better than Patrick (sorry, English degree coming through). Kieran does things. He moves, finds, knows and toughens up. Patrick is more described. Better to tell a story, show don't tell, etc. For great narrative beer labels, I can't recommend Lagunitas' bombers enough. You've done a great job here. When I get to bottling and labeling my beers (rather than just pouring them out of a keg) I hope they will have as much character as yours.

I really like the label concept (and being Irish, I'm partial to both!). The white font looks much better and is really set off by the label colors. Only one thing I saw amiss: on the Patrick label, fix the spelling of the word existence. It should be an E, not an A.

Great job!

Thanks for the replies, changes have been made above and I'm pretty pleased with it. As promised...

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I like the idea of having characters ....

And my wife wants to know if Kieran is available for private parties?

I find that sort of a strange/creepy concept, which is cool, but weird.

Nice labels... cool concept too. At 8.5% A.B.V It's no wonder things have slowed down around the old abbey...

This is a really cool concept. I really like the descriptive label. Now, lets see one for a Lambic. That should be interesting

Arneba28 said:

...lets see one for a Lambic...

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...not me...probably involves...hic......sheep...

hah! next is a witbier that came out too dark for a witbier. It's called Colette the homeley belgian witbier. Should be done tomorrow.

This witbier came out waay too dark, hence the homely. Tasty though.

Coastarine said:

Next is the same irish red ale recipe brewed to the specs of an american amber:

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As a Kieran, this beer sounds particularly delicious.