I'm new, but here are my thoughts. The title needs to be modified. This isn't a simple process from those that haven't brewed before. The author should have brewed using extract (not all grain). It requires less time and less equipment. I would have used a recipe that would allowed for dry yeast and dumped in 2 packets instead of making a starter. The terminology is too confusing since the author doesn't provide a description (wort, mash, sparging) and the equipment used is unnecessary for someone to get started (kettle with spigot, wort chiller, blow-off system).
The author chose to use all-grain over extract, yet a beer with better temperature-controlled fermentation will produce better beer than the difference between all-grain and extract. The fermenation temps isn't even mentioned.
I like how homebrewing is getting more exposure. Those are just my thoughts thinking from the viewpoint of someone who is reading the article and hasn't brewed before.
+1000 fermentation temps are so much more important than a lot of things in good beer. Especially AG vs Extract.
Daverose,
Thanks for taking the time to put that post together and offer your feedback. The boil time omission has been corrected (can't believe we missed that out of the gate). Your other points are appreciated as well - the tradeoff was always explaining versus intimidating them with too much terminology and it's tough to strike the right balance.
And thanks to everyone in the community that voted for this on digg - we're at 543 diggs so far and my co-author at Popular Mechanics has told me that the article is drawing a good amount of traffic.
Chris
I saw it on digg, read it and then came here to see if anyone had spotted it, didn't expect a member to have written it. And to be honest, when I first clicked the link I was thinking oh god here we go, how to make a prison wine-esk concoction. So kudos for taking it way above and beyond that to actually making beer.
A quick point to make: "The murky brown iodine will change to black in the presence of starch—this means you need to do some more mashing. If there's enough sugar, the color will remain the same."
You mention that iodine changes black in the presence of starch but then say that if there's enough sugar it will stay the same color but never go into detail about how/why/what is taking place in the starches to sugars(I understand you didn't have the space), so it's almost like you are saying it will test for starch and THEN saying it will test for sugar when in fact it turns black in the presence of starch, it does not stay the same in the presence of sugar.(It will stay the same color in the presence of cement/air/water/a lot of things to, but that doesn't mean it tests for cement) - just trying to explain myself here.
Oh yeah and vorlauf, but that's been said.
"Hops added at this point in the process give beer its bitterness, because of the alpha acids that are extracted."
The alpha acids are actually isomerized to give bitterness in that they're not all that bitter before. They're extracted because they are partially soluble in water(sure), but not nearly as soluble as iso-alpha-acids. Isomerization creates the vast majority of the bitter compounds - mainly iso-humulone.
Brew Science has a great chapter on this topic if you care to read more, page 285(8.2.4) - [ame]http://rapidshare.com/files/107178743/Brewing_Science_and_Practice__2004_.pdf[/ame]
I might be wrong but I don't think many people use the bucket technique that your teaching. Most use a false bottom or steel braid.
I also would of just used a dry yeast packet instead of your propagator and starter. I can see how this would be super confusing for someone that has never brewed before.
Like someone else said if this is for a beginner this should of been an extract recipe and been simplified.
While you are right, not many people use the method he showed, it is a great way to get into AG a bit cheaper. Papazian shows it in TCJOHB, put a fermenting bucket with a bazillion holes drilled(1/8" worked for me) inside a bottling bucket and instant false bottom. It's a touch crude, but it does get the job done as a lauter tun or a MLT. I made one once in the very beginning and tended to have problems with a stuck sparge, but for ~$10-14 you can't beat it.
I mean think about it. Buy crushed grain, use the Papazian MLT or brew in a bag, no-chill, and you are AG for essentially what the extract kit costs plus a couple of cubes, turkey fryer + pot... so like $40-50 extra.
Hell that might be worthy of a post in it's own: look AG for almost nothing beyond what you already have.