Critique my 1st IPA recipe please

Last year as my friends and I were camping out at the race track after a day of practice racing motorcycles for the races the next day we were drinking beer and bbqing in the pits. i was telling em how i started to brew beer. After some talk i was to make the Turn 4 Omega IPA. Turn 4 at willow springs international raceway is in the shape of an Omega.

This is my first recipe, after brewing much recipes here this is my first. trying to make an IPA little sweet with lots of flavor/aroma finish. whatcha think?

i used Qbrew to come up with this.

Turn 4 Omega IPA
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Brewer: Beantown Brewhouse
Style: American IPA
Batch: 5.00 gal
All Grain

Characteristics
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Recipe Gravity: 1.071 OG
Recipe Bitterness: 59 IBU
Recipe Color: 14° SRM
Estimated FG: 1.018
Alcohol by Volume: 6.9%
Alcohol by Weight: 5.4%
efficiency: 70%

Ingredients
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Maris Otter Malt 10.00 lb, Grain, Mashed
Crystal 40L 1.50 lb, Grain, Mashed
Honey Malt 1.50 lb, Grain, Mashed
Munich (US) 1.00 lb, Grain, Mashed

Columbus 0.50 oz, Pellet, FWH
Cascade 1.00 oz, Pellet, 20 minutes
Cascade 1.00 oz, Pellet, 15 minutes
Simcoe 0.50 oz, Pellet, 10 minutes
Amarillo 0.50 oz, Pellet, 10 minutes
Simcoe 0.50 oz, Pellet, 5 minutes
Amarillo 0.50 oz, Pellet, 5 minutes
Amarillo 1.00 oz, Pellet, 0 minutes

Dryhop 2 weeks
1 oz cascade
1 oz simcoe
1 oz amarillo

Safale US-04 1.00 unit, Yeast,

Notes
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Recipe Notes:


Batch Notes:

I like the Hop schedule, but I think you have too much Crystal. I would cut back the Honey Malt and the 40L to a Half pound each, that should give you the sweetness that your looking for, witout giving the hops so much to compete against. I'm not sure about S-04 since I've never used before, but I would lean towards one of the American ale yeasts,WLP001,S-05 or Wyeast 1056.

thanks i will make the adjustments you suggested and add 1 lb of marris otter to make up the difference.

so anyways.... i mashed at 154 and instead of the 1/2 oz comulbus FWH i did 1 oz at 60 min.

fermented 7 days at 66-68 degrees. transferred to secondary and added dryhops
my og was 1.063 and fg is 1.011. 6.9% abv!

it tasted great! a nice slight sweetness to it and the hops are somewhat of that a citrius ipa. so far so good!