Looks good, from what I can tell. Ah, the ol' extract+steeping grains sure takes me back!
That's a purdy kettle/burner setup you got there. What'd you pay for it?
As for pasting images, click the little picture button on the "go advanced" post page, and it brings up a dialogue box. Enter the location of your picture into the box.
Or copy-paste the image's address into the message box, put "img" at the beginning and "/img" at the end, and replace the quotations with opening and closing brackets. Ah like-a-so:
[img] image address [/img]