Thanks guys. Looking back on the article, there is a lot I would change. I submitted 2 versions, and I guess the editor picked portions from both they wanted to publish. In the future, I'm going to be doing some brewery profiles along with interviews, a section on sour beers, and a short summary of the legal status of homebrewing in different states.
If anyone has any ideas of beer/homebrewing related topics, feel free to let me know!