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Old 05-20-2008, 06:39 PM   #1
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going to be doing a pale ale for my next batch decided to put a label together...my last name is gerber so i think it is fitting...what do ya think?

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Old 05-20-2008, 07:30 PM   #2
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I like it. My only comment would be the contrast difference between the horns and the baby. I would recommend either lightening the horns or darkening the baby to more black (or possible red).

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Old 05-20-2008, 07:54 PM   #3
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I like it. My only comment would be the contrast difference between the horns and the baby. I would recommend either lightening the horns or darkening the baby to more black (or possible red).

-Todd
yeah i gotcha there i noticed that as well...
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Old 05-22-2008, 02:07 PM   #4
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I agree, if you bring the baby and horns into the same intensity it would be better. Baby fangs could be funny, too.

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Old 05-22-2008, 02:49 PM   #5
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+1 on what everyone else said...also, i think that your brewery logo is cool, but somehow it looks odd on the baby's head? im not sure...

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Old 05-23-2008, 02:59 PM   #6
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someone scanned a Gerber label... That's the Gerber baby, right?

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Old 05-23-2008, 03:07 PM   #7
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It seems to me that the bottom part with the 12 oz and the bottled on date. Could go together better, it doesn't seem to be part of the same label to me.

I would either give it the green border on all 4 sides or use a black border, I would also like to see it with the same green font and the green leaf brewery logo.

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I like it, maybe use a HOP leaf for the leaf design as well as incorporating more uniform color on baby and horns.

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