I would say off the bat I like the colors but i think i've seen this label far too many times. It's not a criticism on your label specifically but rather to them as a whole. Maybe you could try to play with the mountain in a more abstract way so that it signifies something else. Or use different text and move it around a bit. It's something about the centered mountain but i can't figure out what. Maybe its just me! Try and make a few more and play with shapes, design and colors that you normally wouldn't use. That way you can experiment a bit more.
GOOD LUCK!
P.S. I'm also in the process of making my label :P
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Primary 1: Cellis White
Primary 2: Scottish Ale
Primary 3: Empty
Conditioning: Milk Stout
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