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Old 12-09-2009, 02:47 AM   #1
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Be honest. I can take it.

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Old 12-09-2009, 03:13 AM   #2
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So I'm guessing people aren't digging this logo based on the fact that I haven't received any comments. Please leave criticism if you look and don't like. That's the only way I'll be able to make some good changes.

Here is the logo on the first label I've ever tried to do. Just gives you another look of the logo.

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Old 12-09-2009, 12:36 PM   #3
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50 views and no comments. Ouch. I guess that means back to the drawing board.

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Old 12-09-2009, 12:37 PM   #4
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I wasn't sure what I thought of the logo until I saw it on a label and I liked the label.

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Harry -

1. I like your label and logo very much.

2. You including a bar code on your label made me chuckle.

3. Don't worry about the lack of responses - posting at 9:47 and then wondering why no one has responded at 10:13 just isn't realistic, imho.

Well done on the logo and label!

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Old 12-09-2009, 01:16 PM   #6
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Harry -

1. I like your label and logo very much.

2. You including a bar code on your label made me chuckle.

3. Don't worry about the lack of responses - posting at 9:47 and then wondering why no one has responded at 10:13 just isn't realistic, imho.

Well done on the logo and label!
Thanks! But I posted the logo and label at around 8pm last night and had no responses this morning. Yeah, the bar code might not stay on there. I thought it was funny and I put my kids' birthdays as the numbers on the bar code.

Thanks again!
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I'm sure there is still some tweaking that I can do to add detail and clean it up, but I need to learn how to do that first. Any suggestions regarding this?

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I'm sure they'll love it at the Deerhead Inn.

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I'm sure they'll love it at the Deerhead Inn.
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Old 12-09-2009, 01:52 PM   #10
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Thanks! But I posted the logo and label at around 8pm last night and had no responses this morning.
The timestamp for the OP for me was 10:47pm, second post at 11:13pm, and then the morning post at 8:36am.

Anyway...

I think the lettering for your label should not be blended with the barley image. The lettering should sit fully in front of the barley. That would make it a little cleaner.

EDIT: oh, and on the stout label, maybe add the green color to the area right under Bessy's belly? Seems like that was missed when you added the color.
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