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Old 06-28-2008, 07:55 PM   #1
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Hey guys
I would love to get some input on my first beer label. Any criticisms, thoughts or suggestions are very welcome!



I have tried the "oz." and "abv" at the bottom with the "Bavarian Weizen" up higher also, so that's also a possibility.

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Old 06-28-2008, 07:59 PM   #2
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Hey guys
I would love to get some input on my first beer label. Any criticisms, thoughts or suggestions are very welcome!



I have tried the "oz." and "abv" at the bottom with the "Bavarian Weizen" up higher also, so that's also a possibility.
I like the colors!
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Old 06-28-2008, 08:01 PM   #3
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Van Gogh? I like it.

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No actually, it's this guy:
Dustin Batt
http://dustinbattart.com/index.htm

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Well, his artwork is great! I like the label. Do you know the guy?

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no I dont, but i emailed him about it to make sure it's ok with him. he may get a few beers out of it!

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Old 06-28-2008, 08:37 PM   #7
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I would put the "abv" on the same line as the "5.3%". I like it!

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I love the artwork. I think the label would be cooler with a border above and below the art with the text on the borders. (sort of like a letterbox or wide screen effect... ) I think the text on top of the pic. kind of distracts from the art.

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