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Old 12-31-2009, 11:20 PM   #1
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Default Suicide Blonde label - concept to completion

sketching and painting were all done with a wacom tablet in photoshop. comments and constructive criticism are welcomed.



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Old 12-31-2009, 11:24 PM   #2
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Looks good. My only suggestion would be to make her thong different color. It almost looks like her butt cheeks are completely separated and you can see through the to the front of her dress.

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Old 12-31-2009, 11:26 PM   #3
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fuking awesome. not sure if her booty is round enough though...lol.

reminds me of my daughter's old Bratz dolls.

if she's a suicide blonde give her a .45 in her left hand, or maybe a hangman rope... but then again maybe your saying/thinking along a diff line.

thong needs diff color and prob like her left arm & hand more defined.

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Old 12-31-2009, 11:38 PM   #4
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if she's a suicide blonde give her a .45 in her left hand, or maybe a hangman rope... but then again maybe your saying/thinking along a diff line.
a suicide blonde is a girl who *dyed* by her own hands (i.e., a fake blonde).
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Old 12-31-2009, 11:55 PM   #5
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ahh, didn't know that.

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Old 12-31-2009, 11:56 PM   #6
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*nevermind*

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Old 01-01-2010, 12:02 AM   #7
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I would prefer the logo not to be covering the best part...I think there may be to much going on with the logo that high. But it looks excellent great job!

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After lightening the "thong" part, it looks like her gooch is hanging out. Maybe plumpen the cheeks so that they meet before the skirt.

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Looks pretty awesome. What's up with that left eye? it's like twice the size of the right one and the eyebrow is up over the hair?

Otherwise, that is one great sketch.

I also prefer the first thong over the second, something about it doesn't sit right that way, and I was fine with the first image.

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I think you need to definitely make the butt cheeks closer together. They look too far apart. Additionally, the left eye is too big.

You have amazing skills, so I'm sure this stuff is not hard for you to fix. Fantastic job.

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