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Cold Country Brewery · 09-04-2011, 01:32 PM

Smokey Porter

bionicbrew · 09-11-2011, 05:11 PM

I like this one! nice job making the name look like smoke. I like the semi-hidden brewery name, ABV and location. good job.

Cold Country Brewery · 09-14-2011, 01:49 AM

Thanks much!

gratus fermentatio · 09-14-2011, 02:32 AM

I'm really liking the whole Smokey Bear thing! The space to Smokey's left, under the "Smokey Porter" seems a bit empty to me, I know, it's full of fire & burning trees, but it still seems like it needs a little something there.

Also, I think the text for "Smokey Porter" should be a bit larger, this could help reduce that "empty" seeming area. Maybe enlarge the font to about twice the current size & stack the words? At the very least, I think I'd increase the font size.
Just my 2 cents worth. Regards, GF.

Cold Country Brewery · 09-21-2011, 03:12 PM

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Originally Posted by gratus fermentatio

I'm really liking the whole Smokey Bear thing! The space to Smokey's left, under the "Smokey Porter" seems a bit empty to me, I know, it's full of fire & burning trees, but it still seems like it needs a little something there.

Also, I think the text for "Smokey Porter" should be a bit larger, this could help reduce that "empty" seeming area. Maybe enlarge the font to about twice the current size & stack the words? At the very least, I think I'd increase the font size.
Just my 2 cents worth. Regards, GF.

Thanks, I appreciate the input! I tried stacking and it doesn't work because of the "smoke." I guess I could always take the "smoke" out of the bottom word. I bumped up the font a bit and it does look better. Thanks again.