The first one just seems to be missing something. But the one with just the barley and no hops does too...But when you put the hops in it just goes the other direction. Maybe smaller hops? Maybe the two together in the middle under the barley?
I like the idea of losing the hops, the color throws it off. I like the barley but if you decided to lose that as well, I'd add Portland Oregon to the logo.
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Kegged: Citra IPA
Bottled:*empty*
Fermenting: Dusseldorf Alt
Planned: Black IPA, Munich Helles, Belgian Golden Strong, IIPA, Serrano/Habanero Cream Ale...