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Old 07-06-2009, 02:55 AM   #1
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Default River Smash Pale Ale Label

Here's a label for a "special occasion" beer that I brewed today.

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I normally don't like explanatory text on labels, but I included a little bit on this one. Hopefully the haiku balances it out.

Two small details that still bug me: the the small text around the brewery logo is impossible to read, and the clouds in the photograph are blown out. I also have a little bit of item positioning to clean up.

But generally, I think I like. What say you?

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nice one steve. i dig the haiku. nice photo as well.

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