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Old 05-07-2008, 06:27 PM   #1
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Default Raspberry Wheat

Ok, so I usually just keg things, but Red asked me to brew up some raspberry wheat as a b-day gift for a friend of hers. It'll be bottled, so I figured I needed a label! Here is my first pass at it. Some beer and brewery info will go in the grey box on the right.



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Old 05-07-2008, 06:39 PM   #2
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I like it, but I think that lightening up the text a bit to help it stand out would be good.

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Plus maybe a feathering on the edges of the picture to blend in better for a smoother cutoff than a hard one. But looking good!

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Old 05-08-2008, 02:26 AM   #4
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That warning wasn't personally directed at me, was it?

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Old 05-08-2008, 04:20 AM   #5
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That warning wasn't personally directed at me, was it?
I think it was...

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Old 05-08-2008, 04:35 AM   #6
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Plus maybe a feathering on the edges of the picture to blend in better for a smoother cutoff than a hard one. But looking good!
I like the hard edge...Very....Paper Back Horror Novel esque.
What would happen if you added a white of light gray drop shadow to the lettering to help it stand out.
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Old 05-08-2008, 11:54 AM   #7
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print that out and look at it. i am betting it will be too dark. dark images look better on a back lit monitor than printed on paper.

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Thanks for all the feedback!

Indeed, the colors needed to be adjusted for printing. The red especially needed help.

There was a drop shadow of gray on the upper text, but not the DDBC - I moved the shadow down and over a little more for better vis, and added a grey to the DDBC as well.

Still can't decide about the feathered edge on the photo. Of course, it seems Photoshop does blurs differently now (just upgraded from Elements 2 to Elements 6) and I can't figure the friggin' blur out now!

Also, added the gray wheat heads and the pawprint.

And, no, mrk305, that warning was not aimed at you! Sounds like it hit without being aimed, however

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