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HomerT 05-13-2008 12:45 AM

A Pair of New Ones....
 
Here are my latest two labels....Pay no attention to the ABV values, they are from old label masters...

My Honey Amber Ale.....
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c2...ls/Slide10.jpg

And my Belgian Strong Golden...
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c2...ls/Slide11.jpg

Any thoughts/suggestions/taunts? :D

-Todd

BigKahuna 05-13-2008 01:37 AM

I do hate snakes! But there is no denying the concept of the serpent and the apple. Very good.

The hottie and the barrels...Man....Sign me up. Who could resist?

mstev50 05-13-2008 02:10 AM

Very cool Homer. I like the Honey Amber. I was thinking along the same lines for the background on my Honey Wheat.
I see we're almost neighbors! Where do you go for your supplies locally? I've been getting a lot of stuff from the Wine Barrel in Livonia.

HomerT 05-13-2008 12:35 PM

Thanks guys.

Mstev50,

I order alot online. But I do also hit up Michigan Brewing Company when I am in the mood for a drive. And lately I have been going to Brewmasters in Milford. Small place, but really great people. I am not a fan of the wine-barrel, although I had to run there Sunday to buy grolsch gaskets for my Honey Amber.

-Todd

Liquidicem 05-13-2008 01:47 PM

You have grammar problem on the second label. It says "alcohol may has caused" and should say "alcohol may have caused"

Other than that I really like them a lot.

HomerT 05-13-2008 01:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Liquidicem (Post 675721)
You have grammar problem on the second label. It says "alcohol may has caused" and should say "alcohol may have caused"

Other than that I really like them a lot.

Thanks for the catch. I was editing an older label and missed that.

Lukus 05-13-2008 05:13 PM

They look great. The honey comb background is a nice touch. very nice.

Johnnyare 04-17-2014 07:40 AM

The tibia and fibula of the right leg of the Honey ale girl are too long. She would have a noticeable limp. Her lower phalanges are under proportioned as well. She seems to be wearing boxers, but only on her right leg, and why is the band on the barrel that is laying down not rusted? Has it been replaced, or have the others been subjected to some water damage. If so how did that band escape the chemical change? Your choice of red delicious apple seems odd in that they were not introduced until the late 1800s...too nit picky? Looks great! I'd drink that.

dantose 04-25-2014 05:38 PM

Adding a shadow under the girl on the barrel she's sitting on would help ground her. She looks a little floaty.

Ranman481 05-04-2014 10:43 PM

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I also have an "Original Sin". It was my very first brew attempt.


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