IMO, the "Limited Edition" "2008" parts look out of place.
Also, there is nothing tying it all together. It is just kind of bland.
But +1 for the Brew Maiden
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Kegged: Citra IPA
Bottled:*empty*
Fermenting: Dusseldorf Alt
Planned: Black IPA, Munich Helles, Belgian Golden Strong, IIPA, Serrano/Habanero Cream Ale...
Chick is hot and the white background is a great base for a label.
"Limited Edition" is hard to read and is out of place, as is the 2008. I'd put it along a horizontal line towards the bottom or right below Oktoberfest Bier. 2008 should be half the size of Oktoberfest Bier and Limited Edition should be half the size of 2008.
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Bavarian blue checker flag motif should be in there somewhere.
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On Draft:
Degradation IPA 8.2%
Blackstrap porter 6.1%--under nitro
Freedom's Bitter Alimony Ale
Holding tanks:
Conical #1:Nichts
Bottles: 4 cases--IRV Belgian style golden strong ale
2 cases--IRV Brett conditioned Belgian strong ale
2 cases--IRV Brett and wine oak aged strong ale
On Deck:
And there is no need to literally translate "West Palm Beach, Florida, America"
It just doesn't really translate...I speak pretty fluent German, and I was even confused by this. . .
Love the Maedchen, though.. . .
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On Draft:
Degradation IPA 8.2%
Blackstrap porter 6.1%--under nitro
Freedom's Bitter Alimony Ale
Holding tanks:
Conical #1:Nichts
Bottles: 4 cases--IRV Belgian style golden strong ale
2 cases--IRV Brett conditioned Belgian strong ale
2 cases--IRV Brett and wine oak aged strong ale
On Deck:
Oktoberfest Bier
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