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Old 05-03-2009, 04:15 PM   #1
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Old 05-03-2009, 04:44 PM   #2
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Plain and simple perhaps you could a little more info and put a border on it...
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Old 05-03-2009, 09:36 PM   #3
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Looks like your going into a cemetery.... is the beer that bad if you drink it?

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Old 05-03-2009, 10:28 PM   #4
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I just did 3 hours of work on it and lost it because it did not save right or something errr.

My wife said the same thing about the cemetery.

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Old 05-04-2009, 10:56 AM   #5
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I'd like to see a version with a watercolor filter on it. I like the gates. It has kind of a gates to heaven feel (basically the same as a cemetery I guess) that seems perfect for a Belgian Triple.

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Old 05-04-2009, 12:45 PM   #6
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I agree with Woollybugger2, I think a border around the picture would look nice. Also, maybe increase the font a little bit, so your brewing company stands out more.

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Old 05-05-2009, 03:13 AM   #7
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yeah i have to abondon this one because of copy right laws

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This image disturbs me. There is a gate, and concrete gate.. holders... but no fence.
I'm totally put off by it. Perhaps its my own little OCD, but why would anyone have a gate,
when anyone can just walk around it?

I'm glad you are abandoning it.

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Old 05-05-2009, 02:18 PM   #9
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Looks like a cemetery. I thought it was another Zombie brew...

I do like the color and overall appearance, but the gates look like you are entering a place of death.

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Old 05-05-2009, 02:44 PM   #10
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yeah i have to abondon this one because of copy right laws
That's the last thing I would worry about unless you plan to sell it.
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