Originally Posted by tom9d
I would maybe adjust the angle on "Eternal" and "Student" in the top one. It's a bit sharp, which makes it a bit difficult to read. Perhaps a more gentle arch would work.
I agree with what Tom said, but I'm guessing the triangle has some sort of symbolism for you?
Also, just a slight suggestion for the label. I would maybe make the ingredients, O.G, A.B.V, and about the brew a different font from everything else. Something a little simpler (some kind of basic, sans serif font http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=501
). The other one just seems a little hard to read that small in blocks of text.
They both look good though!