There's really nothing technically wrong with it. It's
simple, the border looks nice.
I, personally, think that stylized text is messy
unless it serves a very specific function. But I don't
know what Kilju means, so I could be off base
I personally think it would look nicer just as the
underlying font without the wispy vector embellishment.
Along with that vein of thinking, I feel like the weathering
effects in the second image destroy the legibility of the