Originally Posted by 0202
The first one. Absolutely.
The second one has a weaker composition and the background is confusing. The ribbon is also obviously distorted
The third one, well... It reminds me of a scrapbook page gone wrong. No offense there, it just lacks composition and clarity, especially with all the text.
The first one though has nice colors, a good composition, is easily readable and obviously more polished.
THANK YOU FOR ALL THE RESPONSES.
I appreciate them.
These three labels were not meant to be consitent or have a series look.
I tried three different looks, playing with different concepts.
You got it spot on as to what I was trying to convey.
The first one I was going for the typical contemporary/commercial look.
The second one also, just lot a resolution in bewtween saving it from one program to another.
The third one, LOL!, I was going for the disorganized, bright, "gettho" look. Trying to match the design to the words and title, unglorifying the beer in sorts.
These labels are a coming out of sorts for me, as I have not done any designing in a couple years. Also I'm not really familiar with the programs I was using, Photoshop Elements and Print Shop.
I wanted to just put something out there from the top of my head, to get my creative juice back flowing, thus they were all pretty much unrefined, one shot deals. Main thing is I had fun with it, and I will be refining as I get a little more serious, although I do like to keep it fun and tongue in cheeky.
Again, thanks for the input as it gives me ideas on where to inprove and also reinforces my concepts on what I wanted to convey.
p.s. More to come!!!!!!!!!!!!1