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Old 01-20-2007, 05:46 AM   #1
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This is my first label. It's scaled to fit on the Avery 6464 labels. Any feedback would be appreciated!

It actually looks a little smoother than the attached image...

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Old 01-20-2007, 06:43 AM   #2
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looks good. I would take the border from around the flag though...



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Old 01-20-2007, 02:06 PM   #3
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Hard to read from here but I like it a lot (anything patriotic)...nice first effort.

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Old 01-20-2007, 03:18 PM   #4
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Okay - here are the latest versions. I got rid of the border, lightened the colors and tried a crystalized version...

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Old 01-20-2007, 03:50 PM   #5
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Looks good; but because "American Amber Ale" is set on a curve, don't italicize. It will look better. I like the scribbled effect on the flag better than the pixelated version.

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Old 01-20-2007, 03:59 PM   #6
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Label looks good.

I especially like your warning...(that isn't from a real life experience is it??)

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Old 01-20-2007, 04:39 PM   #7
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I like the first version, but yeah, de-italicize it. The crystalized one, I don't care for.

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Old 01-20-2007, 04:55 PM   #8
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okay - lost the italics. Thanks for the input!

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No - HB99 - not from first hand experience. At least not the pregnancy bit....

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Old 01-20-2007, 05:19 PM   #10
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That looks REALLY good!

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okay - lost the italics. Thanks for the input!

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