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02-09-2008, 12:26 AM
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Label and logo feedback
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What do you guys think?
Constructive criticism welcome.
Thanks for looking.
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02-09-2008, 01:27 AM
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I like them! Great job! 
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Rich
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02-09-2008, 02:05 AM
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Thanks Rich.
I just didn't know. I sat there playing around with them for a while and just wanted some opinions. Some of the labels here are just amazing. So I thought I would try to be somewhat amazing.
Thanks for the input.
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02-09-2008, 04:21 PM
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They look great but I can't figure the German text with an American Image.
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02-09-2008, 05:51 PM
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Looks great, but apfelwein isn't brewed according to the reinheitsgebot, I don't think.
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02-09-2008, 07:03 PM
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Originally Posted by PseudoChef
Looks great, but apfelwein isn't brewed according to the reinheitsgebot, I don't think.
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that is what I was going to say. there is absolutely nothing reinheitsgebot about apfelwien!
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02-09-2008, 08:23 PM
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Originally Posted by krispy d
that is what I was going to say. there is absolutely nothing reinheitsgebot about apfelwien!
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Hmm, I guess not. I'll Take it off. You know Edwort has it on his label as well. I went and checked after the question was raised. However the Reinheitsgebot only applies to beer does it not?
Well that part is coming off. Funny enough. I actually went and read the text of the Reinheitsgebot. So I think I will just take that off my labels. It is just marketing fluff anyways.
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Last edited by Sloppy Sam; 02-09-2008 at 08:36 PM.
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02-09-2008, 09:34 PM
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Originally Posted by orfy
They look great but I can't figure the German text with an American Image.
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I agree. It seems like a confused theme, with Uncle Sam and the German text. I think you should either stick with an American theme, or consider a German icon for the mascot.
Maybe Hammered Hitler? Alcoholic Adolf?
The labels look great, though!
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02-09-2008, 10:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Mike B
I agree. It seems like a confused theme, with Uncle Sam and the German text. I think you should either stick with an American theme, or consider a German icon for the mascot.
Maybe Hammered Hitler? Alcoholic Adolf?
The labels look great, though!
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Ha ha That made me laugh.
Well I guess what I was shooting for is my nickname is Sloppysam, I am of German Decent but of course born in the US. So I was trying to encompass both of the nationalities. However having to explain that everytime I hand out a bottle is not good either.
Thanks for the feedback and I will probably change the labels to take the German text off.
Hammered Hitler. I am going to have to name a batch of marzen that.
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02-10-2008, 07:05 AM
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For the love of beer!
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That's better.
Being Hyper-critical the tails on the S and the B and uncle Sam leaning make my eye see it is off kilter.
It isn't and you probably wouldn't see it on the bottle.
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