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Old 07-05-2009, 08:44 AM   #1
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Default Label Attempts. Please help me make them look more professional

Here are my attempts at some labels. They are all just practice, but I was hoping you guys could tell me what's working for me and what isn't? Basically what can I change/do to them to make them look more professional.

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Old 07-05-2009, 05:38 PM   #2
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They look good to me. The only one I don't like was the Royal Raider one. It seems to crowded.



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Old 07-05-2009, 05:47 PM   #3
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I like them all.

As a Raider fan, I really like the first one !!!

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Old 07-05-2009, 05:50 PM   #4
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Love the sasquatch label.

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Get rid of the cheesy border in the last one would make it look alot better in my opinion

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Old 07-05-2009, 07:14 PM   #6
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Get rid of the cheesy border in the last one would make it look alot better in my opinion
+1 for that. Also, maybe adding a simple border to the second one might give it a more "label" like look.

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Old 07-06-2009, 12:31 AM   #7
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Hey Guys,

Thanks to all five of you for your feedback.

Yeah, The Royal Raider one is a bit crowded- maybe I can scale down the text a bit or maybe move/eliminate the bottle.

I really liked the Sasquatch one too, but those guys are right about losing the green border, I made it much less bold and I think it looks much better.

I've been trying out some other labels, maybe you guys can take a look and let me know if they are pretty good or what I can improve on.

Again, thanks for your feedback- I appreciate you taking the time.

Redo of Sasquatch- scaled back border



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Old 07-06-2009, 12:36 AM   #8
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Not sure if this pic will show up, but here is the Sasquatch label without the green border. Not too sure if it looks better with the scaled down green border or without it completely.

[img=http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/4209/deeppines1.jpg]

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Lose the bar code in favor of a brewed/bottled date.

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Love the Sasquatch label. I think I prefer the no-border version.



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