gicts

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My family is of German heritage and my interest of Germany has been rekindled do to needing to take another German language class to graduate college Anyway, I think I have the grammar correct.

It is somewhat of a generic and can be adapted to whatever I am brewing (beer or wine)

Any thoughts and criticism is very much welcome

SevenFields

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I like it. I would just experiment with some different colors of the outside and the lettering so the beer lady stands out a little more.

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SeamusMac

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Would you consider extending the label downwards so that you can have a complete circle in the center of the label? That way you might be able to arc the lettering on the bottom, which I always think is aesthetically pleasing.

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gicts

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great points. I'll see what I can do

machinelf

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It's looking good. One easy tweak would be to make some of the words more prominent than others. Perhaps if Der Kuhls were larger and maybe partially behind the woman's head it would look more logo-ey.

gicts

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Getting better or worse?

machinelf

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This is more like what I was meaning:



This was done quickly and is rough, but you get the idea. I had to move the woman off-center because of the different word lengths, so you may not be into that.

gicts

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wow! Thanks. I do see what you mean. That really makes it stand out and look professional!