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Old 07-01-2009, 09:25 PM   #1
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I brewed this for a party my friend Jeff is throwing. I'm going for a traditional look here. Comments?

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Old 07-01-2009, 09:31 PM   #2
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Nice! Just a thought here, but shouldn't wheat be listed as an ingredient too? Regards, GF.

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Old 07-01-2009, 09:51 PM   #3
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Oops. Yeah, I did forget to add the wheat. I'll change it.

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Old 07-01-2009, 09:57 PM   #4
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Nice label. Good traditional look. If I were going to change anything, I would consider the "Jeff Weizen" banner. To me, it kind of takes away from the symmetry of the label if that makes any sense at all. I'd either go with something without any kind of depth perspective or maybe drop it a bit and put the "Brewed in the Backyard" part above it. Still, it is a really cool label.

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Old 07-01-2009, 11:27 PM   #5
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or make it all one word and turn it into Jeffeweizen...otherwise sweet label

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Old 07-02-2009, 12:07 AM   #6
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Here's version 2 where I tried to incorporate several excellent suggestions.

Question: The bottling dates. Too much?

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Old 07-02-2009, 12:26 AM   #7
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That's a great lookin' label!

I have tons of reading to do here, but that's the type of label that I want to make. Simple, clean design.

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Old 07-02-2009, 03:54 PM   #8
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I like the 2nd label better. I think the fact that the label is going to wrap around the bottle will bring back some of the 3-dimentional feel you were probably going for with the banner in the first version. +1 on the Jeffeweizen too.

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Old 07-02-2009, 09:11 PM   #9
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I love the Jeffeweizen name. I think it would "pop" more if the lettering on Jeffeweizen were white, giving you more contrast with the brown background.

Nice work.

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