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Old 03-01-2009, 02:44 PM   #1
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Default IPA Label for Critique...

My second label for critique... still a work in progress, especially the write-up on the left, but I appreciate opinions...

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Old 03-01-2009, 02:46 PM   #2
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I like it, but shouldn't those be hops the character is walking over? Anyway, nice label.
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Old 03-01-2009, 02:48 PM   #3
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Yes they should.... still lookin' for a good pic. In the mean-time, I just liked the colors and sunset on this one.

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Old 03-17-2009, 11:32 PM   #4
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"... in India Pale Ale's, were actually..."

India Pale Ale doesn't own "were" so it shouldn't have an apostrophe. Should just say "...in India Pale Ales, were actually..."

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Old 03-18-2009, 09:08 PM   #5
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very whimsical

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Old 03-20-2009, 02:44 AM   #6
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haha i like the 7.9% on the briefcase

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