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Old 05-01-2007, 10:27 AM   #1
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Default I think I've finally got it...

I'm thinking this will be the standard "label" for my bottles. I've been workign on this for a while and I'm about 95% decided on this one.

Everything will stay the exact same for every beer except for the label text.

I like it. What can I improve on or change?

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Old 05-01-2007, 12:31 PM   #2
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looks good...aren't you the guy with the shirts too?

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Old 05-01-2007, 01:22 PM   #3
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I really like it. Only thing I was thinking is that there is a lot of brick on either side. Maybe make the label a bit narrower? Just a though. Looks kick a$$

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Old 05-01-2007, 01:27 PM   #4
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I'm wondering how it would look if the bricks were a little fuzzier, a little less in focus, so that the (kick-ass) logo would stand out a bit more. If the background's a bit softer, it'll make the logo be more of the focus (which I think is what you want), and it'll have a bit more "pop."

Looks good, though!

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Old 05-01-2007, 01:30 PM   #5
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i agree with jester, there is a lot of brick. have you considered making it portrait rather than landscape?
or you could fuzz up the bricks a bit...

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Old 05-01-2007, 01:37 PM   #6
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I like it, but here is my criticism. The brick is obviously a picture of bricks and the logo and writing are rendered with a graphics tool. I think you'd have a much more appealing label if you matched your design elements.

If you want to follow my advice, you could take the bricks and make them look more like a rendered graphic or make your graphics appear to be painted on the wall. You could also make the logo appear to be attached to the wall; like it’s a sign.

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Old 05-01-2007, 01:52 PM   #7
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in photoshop give the bricks a painted look using one of the built in filters... the have your logo on a different layer and use overlay or one of those on the layer options. it will make the logo look like it was painted on the bricks.

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I like it as is Dude, looks real good. One idea: If you wanted different beers to stand out, then you could do a simple, transparent layover on the bricks of different colors. Red ale, a soft red over the bricks... weizen, a soft yellow, etc. This would work real well since the bricks are already grayscale.

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Looks awesome!

Have you given any thought to having the logo busting through the wall like the Kool-aid guy used to?

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Looks awesome!

Have you given any thought to having the logo busting through the wall like the Kool-aid guy used to?
Oh, YEAH!...

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