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Old 01-08-2009, 02:29 AM   #1
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Any thoughts/comments/ramblings/suggestions/criticisms?



For awhile I was doing a whole series of labels with caricatures but thought I'd get away from that for a bit, (actually I got really busy making beer and I gave it away and drank it so fast that I didn't have time to make labels for each batch I made).

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I like it, but the Black Beauty text is cut off a bit on top

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I like it, but the Black Beauty text is cut off a bit on top
+1. I would also add a shadow or something to the white text; the font looks alright, it just doesn't stand out that well (bleeds into the background). Simple, yet attractive

*EDIT* looking again, it may just because the image is small on my pc making it hard to read... *shrugs* */EDIT*
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I like it, but the Black Beauty text is cut off a bit on top
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Otherwise very nice!
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Thanks for the comments. I was trying to be artsy with the cut off text. Maybe I should either cut it off more so that it looks like it should be cut off, or not have it cut off at all.

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