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Old 03-19-2010, 10:20 PM   #1
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Old 03-19-2010, 10:23 PM   #2
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chai ale is hard to read. other than that, looks good.
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Revision after receiving feedback.

EDIT: Note, I changed it to one quarter INCH of beer on the bottom of the bottle. Not one quarter.

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BRASE FUR TEH EXPLOSHUN!
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I get such a boner for the "rising sun" design. Nice work!
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I get such a boner for the "rising sun" design. Nice work!
Thanks!

Here's another redesign based on more input. I'm still learning all the little photoshop tricks.



I'm thinking of adding a stroke effect to the rising sun texture to give it the cel-shaded look.

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Another label for critique. My roommate and I are big fans of MMA which explains the artwork. This beer is in the planning stage.

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You've got some serious skills. Awesome work.

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Thanks! I definitely appreciate the support!
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Which color is better? The black above, or one of the two below?




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