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Old 08-21-2008, 03:58 PM   #1
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Default Edwort's Apfelwein

Taken a picture from the Internet and added some text. This is a very simple design for the Apfelwein.



What do you guys think?

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Old 08-21-2008, 04:04 PM   #2
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I think it looks good. If I would change anything, it would be the center align the bottom text instead of left align. it looks nice, though.

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i like the simplicity. print it out and make sure all the text is thick enough to be easily read.

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Old 08-21-2008, 05:16 PM   #4
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Looks good! What are the right angle brackets on each side of the tree for?

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I think it looks good. If I would change anything, it would be the center align the bottom text instead of left align. it looks nice, though.
Ya, it does look a bit off. Thanks oberon.
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i like the simplicity. print it out and make sure all the text is thick enough to be easily read.
That is what I am afraid off. The fonts do look nice but it may be unreadable or very difficult to read when printed out.
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Looks good! What are the right angle brackets on each side of the tree for?
It is actually a diamond with the tree in the middle. The tree picture and the wordings cut it off.
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Old 08-28-2008, 03:45 AM   #8
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Looks nice and simple, though do agree that when printed, it may be quite hard to read with that font. try to bold the font, and or select a different one with a little more meat. And that "diamond" looks out of place. Wouldn't change anything to remove it. A little color to the leaved would look nice. But that's bringing it out of simple. Here's my quick edit.

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