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Old 11-20-2009, 01:28 AM   #1
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What do you guys think of this label design for my BIIPA??

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Old 11-20-2009, 01:33 AM   #2
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I like it. Can't beat simple vector art.

2 things:
-the IIPA is a little hard to read. Especially the first I since it butts up to the background yellow. consider moving it down, or decreasing the height of the letters so you have a little bit of black border

-The small yellow reverse text is a little hard to read, at least at this size. You could make it slightly bigger, or just add a stroke.

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Old 11-20-2009, 01:34 AM   #3
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i like the label. looks like it could be a tasty beer and the label would stand out good amoungst the mass of beer at my local liquor store like a bumble bee. i just drank a stone-subliminal self righteous, yum!!! speaking of black iipa

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Old 11-20-2009, 02:28 AM   #4
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I think it looks great. The main words don't bother me at all, but I do agree with Edcculus that the smallest text is a bit hard to read, and won't likely print out too well.

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Old 11-20-2009, 02:33 AM   #5
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On a shelf at the liquor store, I would pass it over. It looks generic to me. However, that isn't the point. Props.

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Old 11-20-2009, 05:37 AM   #6
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On a shelf at the liquor store, I would pass it over. It looks generic to me. However, that isn't the point. Props.
Well the point is that it isn't just another ellipse with a ribbon (not to say that there aren't a ton of great labels with that classic design, including on these boards). But the lack of a clever name definitely does make it seem cheesier...

Besides, can't do much else without artistic talent!

Eddculus, I think you're right about the small text, it'd have to be like an 11x17 label for it to be legible...

Thanks for all the input!
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Old 11-20-2009, 05:47 AM   #7
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It reminds me of that caffeinated beer made for night clubbers. Not my style. I'd go with a flamboyant label since beer bottles make awesome wall collections.

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