scottfro

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This isn't the final version but close enough to get some feedback.

Thoughts?



Thanks to SuperiorBrew for the high res hop photo.

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Oakwolf@visi.com

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I think it's beautiful. You incorporated so much -- the ingredient pix, the logo, the "mission statement," the bottle return plea -- and yet it's still a clean look. I think all the horizontal lines accomplish that.

You've got a typo: Please return this bottle to it's...
Should be: Please return the bottle to its...

scottfro

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thank you for the kind words, i'm glad you like it.

and thanks for catching the typo! i'm so bad about it's vs its haha

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fermenator

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Awesome label! Very professional

scottfro

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thanks....any other thoughts/criticisms?

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#30 Chocolate Porter
#27 Smoked Ale
#26 Hard Apple Cider (Champagne Yeast)
#25 Big Als' Blackberry Brew 2008
#15 Hard Apple Cyser

Kegged:
#31 Field Hand Hefeweizen

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Yuri_Rage

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I like it, and I agree 100% with everything already said.

Another nit pick...it's "bottle conditioned," not "bottled conditioned."

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JustDave

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Very nice, I like it. The part about returning the bottle, along with the recycling logo, is a nice touch.

And it looks like you misspelled "orginating", it should be "originating". Nice job!

scottfro

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hahah thank you everyone for catching my grammar and spelling errors!

going to make a few color variations to pick the best then go to print with this i think.

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Bottled:
#30 Chocolate Porter
#27 Smoked Ale
#26 Hard Apple Cider (Champagne Yeast)
#25 Big Als' Blackberry Brew 2008
#15 Hard Apple Cyser

Kegged:
#31 Field Hand Hefeweizen

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scottfro

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so i just made a ton of changes when i started working with this other font. is anyone partial to this one over the other?

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Bottled:
#30 Chocolate Porter
#27 Smoked Ale
#26 Hard Apple Cider (Champagne Yeast)
#25 Big Als' Blackberry Brew 2008
#15 Hard Apple Cyser

Kegged:
#31 Field Hand Hefeweizen

http://www.deterrabrewing.com/forum <-- Vancouver Homebrewing Network

Loweface

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I prefer the first one... It has just enough simplicity to work great...