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Old 05-12-2008, 08:19 PM   #1
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Just found a pic on google images of a guy getting a standing eight, and then threw in my brew name and slogan in Dali font.

Any critizism or suggestions greatly appreciated
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Old 05-12-2008, 08:37 PM   #2
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i dont think you will be able to easily read the white text once printed, they wont be enough contrast. Also the image wont look as good. i would darken the grey.

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i dont think you will be able to easily read the white text once printed, they wont be enough contrast. Also the image wont look as good. i would darken the grey.
as an artist, i completly agree
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Old 05-16-2008, 09:21 PM   #4
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As far as the name and the slogan goes, I like. The pic does need to be tweeked a little so the font will stand out a little more.

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Old 05-16-2008, 10:36 PM   #5
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I found your image using Google search and cleaned it up a little. The people in the background make the embossed effect look a bit strange...especially the dude in the tie. Here's what I came up with (both the cleaned up pic and an embossed sample):



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Damn, Yuri, is there anything you CAN"T do? Good job!

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Thanks everyone, appreciate the advice and pic redo

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