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Old 03-31-2012, 03:29 PM   #21
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Hello, Wow put together very well, loved the attention getter at the beginning, clear crisp and clean, almost sounds like a good beer to me! I would say air it.

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Old 03-31-2012, 03:44 PM   #22
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Nice, It does not have the feel of a lot of local commercials. When I head up to visit my uncle I will have to stop by and check it out. I grew up in Whitmore, Burney and Redding off of Airport Road. If I would have known about you guys last February when i drove through I would have had a reason to do some shopping.

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Old 03-31-2012, 05:09 PM   #23
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Looks great bro, nice work and congrats!

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Old 03-31-2012, 05:11 PM   #24
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Very well made, does NOT have that cheesy made for local cable vibe. Which is a very good thing. I hate those commercials. It's very well put together. If you made it yourself I would be proud, if you hired someone to do it I would definetly be satisfied with their work.

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Old 03-31-2012, 05:16 PM   #25
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WOW, I never thought I'd ever see a homebrewshop tv commercial!!! I like it. Nice clean store, it reminds me of the place I sho at Cap N Cork. Nice and clean and bright. I've been to a few others that are dark and dingy, and some are downright dirty. I always say that I could being my mom into cap n cork....your place looks like it too.

Nice commercial!

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Old 03-31-2012, 06:27 PM   #26
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Very nice commercial

I would change one thing, let those ladies give the closing line at the end, sex sells!

but seriously it is great as is

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Old 03-31-2012, 06:34 PM   #27
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Gotta echo everyone else, looks well done. If I were going to make any change, it would be to close with the same intro, the graphic with the pop. I think that's an attention better...

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Old 03-31-2012, 06:40 PM   #28
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Very well done. That should drive a lot of business your way.

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Old 03-31-2012, 06:51 PM   #29
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needs more chicks in bikinis.

Just kidding, I thought it was very nicely done.

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Very well done.

I've seen some baaaaad local commercials but that was excellent.

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