First off, I'm not an expert and others will be able to give you a better idea I'm sure.
But, the proportions "style-wise" are a little bit off. Whether that matters is up to you.
As guidelines the proportions are:
10-15% crystal
2-3% chocolate (or 1% black)
~11% sugar (not used in ALL cases but it's found)
Your chocolate and crystal malts hit at around 8% for first recipe and are lower for the second. Also, I believe the base malt is supposed to hit around the middle 70's. As for dry hopping or late additions, I "believe" the dry hopping is not consistent with the style (English Mild) and if you do want to do a late addition it should be minimal. Like a 1/2oz or less. The BU:GU ratio should be around 0.50. Again, that's indicative of the style but ultimately it's up to you. Hope this helps somewhat.
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